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EXT.PLAYGROUND.MIDDAY

ESTABLISHING SHOT (HIGH ANGLE):

(CHILDREN ARE CROWDED AROUND ON THE BLACKTOP AT ELEMENTARY SCHOOL RECESS)

MEDIUM SHOT:

(MUFFLED ARGUING)

KID A

SHELLY couldn’t even win a race against a rock, you think he can beat MR.SNAIL?

KID B

Yeah well snails are gross!

Get your ooey gooey musty crusty snail away from me!

KID A

You know what? We’re gonna win!

Let’s go Mr.Snail!

KID B

So what are we waiting for?

CLOSE UP:

(ANIMALS HAVE THEIR TOES ON THE STARTING LINE)

EXTREME CLOSE UP:

(SHELLY GLARING TOWARDS MR. SNAIL)

(MR. SNAIL STARING BACK BLANKLY- READY TO TAKE OFF)

KID A

On your marks, get set, go!

CLOSE UP:

(BOTH THE ANIMALS TAKE OFF, BACKROUND ZOOMING BY QUICKLY)

(FADE IN KIDS CHEERING IN THE BACKGROUND)

(CUT BACK AND FORTH TO EACH ANIMAL, BREAKING A SWEAT)

KID A

Let’s go shelly!

KID B

You can do it!

KID A

Don’t let him get ahead!

KID B

Woohoo!

MEDIUM SHOT:

(ANIMAL AND SNAIL MOVING EXTREMELY SLOWLY)

CLOSE UP:

(STOPWATCH TICKS ONE SECOND)

CLOSE UP:

BOTH ANIMALS ARE NECK AND NECK

SHELLY, VISIBLY FRUSTRATED KICKS A PEBBLE AT MR. SNAIL

THE PEBBLE BOUNCES OFF OF MR. SNAILS SHELL AND HITS SHELLY IN THE FACE, DISORIENTING HIM.

SHELLY IS DIZZY, NOT PAYING ATTENTION, TRIPS OVER A TWIG.

SHELLY STUMBLES OVER AND LANDS ROCKING ON HIS BACK, FEET WAVING IN THE AIR.

MR. SNAIL CROSSES THE FINISH LINE QUIETLY, NOT NOTICING SHELLY.

(THE SCHOOL BELL RINGS)

KID A

(Picks up Shelly on his way running inside)

Mr. Snail keeps on crawling

KID B

(Picks him up and runs after the crowd going back into the building. )

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